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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
I have a piece of constructive criticism for you, however. First of all, I don't think your necks are long enough, but I think this lies in another problem I see.
His neck blends into his shoulders, and while necks do that to a certain extent, it's not so drastic. [link] this is a good example of what I'm talking about. I know he's not facing forward, but it gets the point across. Shoulders are pretty straight and the way you draw them makes it look like he no neck at all, just shoulders.
So I think if you straighten out the shoulders and make your necks a bit longer, you would be golden.
Sorry if this doesnt make sense? I'm not the best at explaining. I do like your art as well, please don't take this rudely.
;D