I've been watching you for a long time! It's been great watching you improve in your art, you've come a long way! I have a piece of constructive criticism for you, however. First of all, I don't think your necks are long enough, but I think this lies in another problem I see.
His neck blends into his shoulders, and while necks do that to a certain extent, it's not so drastic. [link] this is a good example of what I'm talking about. I know he's not facing forward, but it gets the point across. Shoulders are pretty straight and the way you draw them makes it look like he no neck at all, just shoulders.
So I think if you straighten out the shoulders and make your necks a bit longer, you would be golden.
Sorry if this doesnt make sense? I'm not the best at explaining. I do like your art as well, please don't take this rudely.
I have a piece of constructive criticism for you, however. First of all, I don't think your necks are long enough, but I think this lies in another problem I see.
His neck blends into his shoulders, and while necks do that to a certain extent, it's not so drastic. [link] this is a good example of what I'm talking about. I know he's not facing forward, but it gets the point across. Shoulders are pretty straight and the way you draw them makes it look like he no neck at all, just shoulders.
So I think if you straighten out the shoulders and make your necks a bit longer, you would be golden.
Sorry if this doesnt make sense? I'm not the best at explaining. I do like your art as well, please don't take this rudely.
;D